1) you have several typos and errors in your text
2) playing the sub route, after the getting to the free roam, as soon as I got the call from work I got several errors (I tried to ignore them, but it ultimately went back to title)
3) I'm going to assume over time there is going to be more appropriate sprites to reflect whats happening (i.e. you are actually half naked when you are woken up) which also leads into appropriate CGs, like actually having the MC kneeling on the floor after being kicked, Clarissa actually hugging Darian, etc. (the big sister in the towel was really good though)
4) Are we actually going to get real cuck content? Cus that'd be really hot if your big sister and her boyfriend actively cuck you with you directly watching and/or involving other things
5) Is there really no plans to make Billy the top at all?
I don't want this to all sound negative, so here is some positive things as well:
1) The art is pretty good and likable
2) The "bitch" mood of the girls and the "doormat" of the MC are conveyed well and not in bad way that sometimes happens with games like this (when you're into femdom). Normally, I am not a fan of abuse that gets labeled femdom, but this actually feels rather appropriate and can see a lot of potential for really fun stuff moving forward, especially with the "scent" option in the beginning
3) While you had a lot of typos, your dialogue and interactions are done well. It's not a really bad MTL quality of "English" and that's actually something
4) Your responsiveness and communication is a good sign, and gives positive impressions for the game (especially if you fix aforementioned bugs soon instead of "next release)
Some questions:
1) How far are kinks going to go? Like I was interested in the idea of cucking and if billy can top, that means I'd also like pegging. Scent play, besides sweat also makes me wonder about watersports. Linda seems like she'd be really into doing figging, so that along with other spanking content is hot. Any of these on the menu at all or even considerations?
2) Do you actually have the story planned out and know how its going to end? I am not asking for you to tell me, I just want to make sure you're not going with the intention of "winging it" and finding you can't continue because you hit a wall when the sex isn't enough to carry the story.
3) What do you think your release schedule will be like for this game?
4)Game crashed right at the free roam start, so that's...not a good sign. Is there going to be more to choices down the road? Like you picked "submissive" or "dominate" in the very beginning and then got one choice to hop over if you have regret. Is there going to be more choices down the road or is this going to be like "Do you want to see scene A or B?" or "Do you want to opt out of X content?" ?
I guess that's all my thoughts for now. I wish you luck, the game is too short at the moment and having some detrimental bugs means I can't give a proper evaluation, but I am interested in watching this project and seeing how it develops in the next few stages. I think this is something I might want to support, but I'd have to see how a few updates go before I want to commit to anything.