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omg I closed the browser and lost all my feedback I wrote up. Ok let's see what I can remember.

This section is hard to visually figure out. At first I thought the options were horizontal so "Window" or "Unseen Text". I'd recommend using dropdown menus or framing the two options so there's more visual separation.

The period after "say" feels off to me. Perhaps a ":" or ".." or "...".

I like how unique this is, there's a lot of attention put into the Catholicism aspects.

When Aria looks down at her phone, she looks cross-eyed.

It's a little confusing that Gabe goes by Gabe but the text bubbles always say Gabriel. Also Gabe as a character doesn't seem to have much complexity besides his religious journey.

That's all fair.  Yeah, Gabe in the demo is mostly about his spiritual journey, but in each route later he'll develop a skill that will help him support the girl whose route he's on to uplift her and support one another.