Great drawings and color pallete. You know that some of the transitions are lagged out but that aside, I think the 2 next things to fix include having more text displayed at once on the screen (since you encounter so many different dialogues, it'd be nice to have them full), and after that It would be very cool to have rooms that don't have camera follow so we get to look at your nice background art without having to move the camera around. I think the size of the character merits smaller maps
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Thanks for your feedback! When I go back and revisit this and clean it up/expand it more, one of my first goals is definitely going to be modifying the camera.
Unfortunately the text thing is more of a side-effect of how I write dialogue (i prefer to parcel it out in small pieces box by box instead of larger blocks), but I'll see what I can do.