uh-uh Not fair.
The fact that we are in the same competition is crazy because how am I supposed to be as good as this?
I guess the only thing I could say could have been done better if only slightly is to introduce the Motif slightly earlier but that might just be me not hearing it earlier where it might be. First I hear it is at 1:07 which isn't even that far into the song anyway.
of the 2 songs of yours I have heard I can certainly see a style you have since it is quite similar to your last song. and that style is too good for being in small scale productions.