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Cute story, and lovely art! I think the art style is what kept me playing, it was charming and sweet.

The ... was hard to see at first so I didn't know what to do, and sometimes the text would load first and then the image, and the jittering made me feel like I missed a bit of the story, or that the screen moved on without me.

And I didn't really feel like my choices mattered that much in the story. Sometimes I'd choose one thing, and then be given the other choice after, so I just kinda started choosing more at random. I think adding more consequences to all the choices would have made me consider each one more, instead of just clicking.

Nice work though. It fit the theme really well, and the color palette was nice, and again, the art was super sweet.

Thank you for loving the silly drawings I made. I really didn't expect anyone to think the art would be praised XD

For adding more consequences to the choices, that's a very helpful advice. I guess I was trying to scale down the game, but ended up removing some necessary branching moments unintentionally. Will keep this in mind!