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Hey! I love your bug game! You've created such a fun, little world, and I really enjoy the d4,d6,d8 promote/demote system. Was this adapted from something or an original design? I also like Emblems and how instead of levels you improve through these items and other treasure. I do have couple questions about the quickstart.

What is Spirit? It's only mentioned in the description for rest, but I don't know what recovering half my Spirit means.

Will there be a character sheet included in the quickstart in the future?

Also I found a few typos I'd be happy to share if you would find that helpful.

Best of luck on the Kickstarter!

Logan

Brooklet Games341 days ago

Hi Logan! Thanks so much!

It’s an original system, if you can say rolling dice to see who get the highest number is original. Also after I wrote it I found that Diogo’s Lost In The Fantasy World uses a similar versus roll system just with d6s which allows you to add +1 after rolling ties. It’s a nifty pamphlet game: https://diogo-old-skull.itch.io/lost-in-the-fantasy-world/download/cJS3D6bAs4ebvFsdsjeM5jEXRT6E1OApY1K_Fx4X

Thank you for pointing this out!!! Spirit is an old magic system that was in the original version of the game. It’s gone through several iterations but I forgot to remove it from the Advancement and Resting. I’ll include that change in the next version!

I’m working on the character sheet right now! I hope to have it done in the next few days.

I would love to hear any typos you find!

Sincerely,

Jim

Logan Gianella340 days ago

Hi,

Glad I could help! I'm looking forward to seeing the character sheet.

Typically periods go inside the quotation marks. Example pg. 7 or simply a "Calling." At least in America -not sure if other countries do this differently.

Pg. 11 it looks like there is a double space between "have a" and "maximum" in the Max Resolve description.

Anyway that's all I caught!

Logan

Brooklet Games340 days ago

Thanks again! I’ll get these into the next version of the PDF!

Brooklet Games339 days ago

Just uploaded a new version with those changes and the character sheet.

Thanks again for the comments! You rock!!

Jim