It's rare for a game to come out that's as good as this is, especially when this looks to be your first VN (or at least by looking at your Itch profile it is)!
The story is interesting with a cast of characters that are equally as interesting. The renders are all really high quality and have such great lighting that I was surprised to see that this isn't just your first release but also appears to be your first title!
I've said this about other titles but I kind of hate finding this now and not when it was more developed because I'd love to see more of it right now lol.
Minor bugs I noticed:
- At the starts when telling Lucy about us thinking it will be nice to spend more time together the bow and arrow light up red indicating we gained a point with her but we actually don't
- Redirecting the compliment toward Lara also pulses red but no points are actually gained
- When telling Lucy the truth about our dream it pulses red but no points are gained
- Red pulse when selecting "Good thing I like mysteries" but no point gained
Or at least I think they're bugs because those choices were often paired with one that I did see either taking you off the path of that character or losing affection with them.