The writing is surprisingly good - like top 5 on all of itch type good.
The H-scenes (and the lack thereof) is definitely a minus. The one scene we got was a really weird, sorta rapey BJ. Unsure why that was the choice, but hopefully future scenes make up for it/maybe remove the sleep part in a rework.
Thanks for saying so.
As for the lewd, I've said this a bunch on discord, but I pretty much developed the first version of UA in a complete bubble. I had no if people would even play it, let alone enjoy it. I felt like if I didn't include some sort of lewd scene, I'd be hamstringing whatever potential the game may have had.
So, yeah. You're not wrong. It's out of place, and while I think it would probably be fine down the road for these characters, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense where it's at. I'll probably remove it in some future update after I've added more sexual content, but for now it stays since there's really not much else on that front at the moment. And aside from how it comes out of nowhere, most of the feedback on it has been otherwise positive.
The scene looks great - don't get me wrong. It's the questionable consent of the whole thing, especially since the sister that actually has the MC's dick in their mouth is clearly not about to suck his dick when she's awake. I feel like if you just change the BJ to the sister that does wanna suck his dick, no one would bat and eye. Like it would make sense why she's mad he almost leaves again (after she confesses and blows him) and it makes sense in her character arc (as far as I've read, obviously idk future arcs etc.). Those are my 2 cents but I probably have a higher consent threshold than most dudes playing porngames so =/