The game is lovely, but I think there is some kind of issue with how you set up the lose screen. Sometimes if you find a shortcut that works, the game cuts you off anyways, and sometimes the game just ends even when you haven't done anything wrong. You might have been aware of this issue, and just couldn't finish it in time, if so I understand. But it is pretty frustrating for the game to just kill you for seemingly no reason.
Otherwise, this is a very polished and appealing game, especially for a game made in 3 days.