Good story! I just missed some critical options. Is there anyway to fail the game? That would make it more interesting. Overall I like the style and the mood. Also there is a clever use of fonts to indicate who is talking.
There is no way to fail the game, as I wrote the story to follow the lyrics of the song the game is based on. I also didn't manage to write any "fail" state that I was happy with... Maybe a post-jam update one day?