Make the bass at 0:12 a bit louder, idk if you added the octave at the beginning but if you did, try to make it louder and make the 8bit notes sound exactly the same as the ones in the airplane version (Or something close to it). Other than that, it looks good.
I tried as hard as possible to get the instruments sounding as close as I can, it's just tough given that I don't think I have the exact same instrument that they used. Hopefully this is getting close now, though.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oCbDhS0lcrPpTOFjqMpAndR_auYYfBGh/view?usp=shari...
- Try to make the octave at the beginning sound like the octave at the end instead of making it sound like the main instrument.
- At 1:02 have an octave that goes: A G# F# D# E F# G# (Hold G# for the duration C# is held out at 1:05)
- At around 0:20, part of the track gets distorted. I don't know what it is but it sounds like if I was to dip a speaker underwater.
Other than that, looks good!
Hey man, I have done the things you asked. The only issue I had is with the harmony, as I couldn't get all of the notes you said to fit as a line. Let me know if what I have done is hitting the spot, or if you want me to change it. Cheers.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/13ijXehkfhaAYVs5kQ2L10F1Gg2cn4j8U/view?usp=shari...
Is this what you wanted? I want to make sure I understand what you're asking for. ;p
https://drive.google.com/file/d/13Ta1MpGc_BwbWz9-toaf-zGcgEluqP9E/view?usp=shari...