Root movement has no effect on this (This is in every demo animation.)
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60-70% I would say. In RoughDoggy, the girl looks great (though the animation itself is still weird) but the guy jerks back and forth.
In addition to the FBX model, perhaps you should record a video of what it should look like in "reference quality"? I really don't understand the problem with the animation or my model.