Hoo-hoo-hoo!. Hooo! Hoo, hoo! XD
This is definitely one of my favourite submissions!
I really enjoyed so much of it! The way you used the narrator was brilliant! I also really enjoyed how you used the different affordances Twine offers to well. The addition of images were nice. It would have been nice if the audio worked, but the fact that you linked/suggested some was very nice :)
It was a very fun and silly adventure, I can see where the theme for tight-knit fits in. I also liked the little puns you have here and there. I liked that you added the riddles, the muffin-man section, teasing the kid, and talking to the owl! Your writing style and tone was amazing for this kind of piece!
Honestly well done! Keep up the cool creations! :)