Was hoping you kept going with this one, and you did! You've nailed the old-timey feel in both rounds quite well. Even the alliteration in your script.
I'm with Keltfire. I think just a touch more initial focus on the gameplay itself. Which from your response, you already have going through your mind so I digress.
The audio was the focus on the round. While you can play a little without it, you won't do very well (and I don't think you could win, although I wouldn't put it past someone in this group to do it...) Certainly hit the essential part in my book.
I think you're onto something special with the series. Great work!