Another VN I wish I checked out after it was more developed. I didn't want it to end just yet with how interesting things were and getting even more interesting by the minute. Was debating with myself whether or not to wait til 0.3's release before checking this out and with all that has happened I kinda wish I did with all I want to see next!
I think what I'm hoping for most with the next update is that we can clear things up with Lilah. That was equal parts painful and frustrating (For me it was more frustrating than the ending of 0.2), Sadie's comments about it especially. I mean, I get she doesn't know about the amnesia situation, but still lol.
Ignoring the grammar typos I'll just point out the main ones (Probably fixed in v0.3 but just incase).
I think the most hilarious one was with MC and Cora. After the whole initiation business when they're talking dirty to each other the names get mixed up for a few lines and makes it sound like Cora is meant to be a futa lol.
Cora (Should be MC): But I'm the one who's going to fuck you good now.
MC (Should be Cora): I confess after feeling how good you re with your hands, I'm excited to try out your other skills.
MC (Should be Cora): Let's see how good you are with your cock.
There's one when MC is talking to Nina after the second memory flashback. After telling her about the confrontation with Cora she mentions that it was her son that was taken, but Nina then mentions lucking out with situation with Cora's daughter.
Another I noticed was with MC, Skye and Tracy.
Skye: Angel was already trying to steal your client, MC (should be Tracy).
After Helga takes off her dress MC comments how her body is perfect.
MC (I should be Helga): I'd only look like this with you
Or at least I think it's meant to be Helga saying that. Makes sense given what was just said and what comes not long after.
When MC tells Helga "One day I'll take you there, you can be sure of that." he doesn't actually say it, it's more like quick note that literally says "MC For personal reasons, I can't go there right now"
During the cocktail event there's spacing missing when Cora says
"AndMCis... a boyfriend?"
When MC talks about Nina's ability in the combat class she says to not exaggerate and the next line is mislabled as Nina.
Nina (Should be mc): I'm not exaggerating.
After MC is freed and starts to fight Isai
MC (Should be Isai): Do you really think you're going to leave that easily?