That was neat. I liked where this was going. My suggestions would be for the main character talking, I would have cut out the outside of the character and made that transparent. Even if it wasn't colored, it would have at least looked like a cutout. For Sound effects, look up pink noise, that's kind of what they use in StarTrek for the engine rumbling. Also, a satisfying *SNIP* when you cut the cord would have been cool too.