The text really threw me off, and the story was bland
Yet, at the same time... the character felt like you had hidden character details; like I could get a sense of his innermost thoughts.
Overall, good game! besides the offputting return button at the bottom of the settings menu and the text
Oh, and speaking of thoughts.... how do you think of this small fic I conjured? : D
Love a Monster - LefetellC - Original Work [Archive of Our Own]
tysm for for feedback! I’m actually glad you pointed out how bland it was because it is and I hope to go back to fix. This game was in my drafts while I was working on other games, so I just wanted to post it and get it over with. But im happy I was able to convey the mystery and wanting to get to know the character. I wanted the game to be able to convey his mental health and I guess the plot to it. For the future of this game I’m planning on updating it after I make a few more visual novels. Then it can be easier to make and I can see what needs work.
Also I LOVE the fic you wrote. You have a good way with words!
