tysm for for feedback! I’m actually glad you pointed out how bland it was because it is and I hope to go back to fix. This game was in my drafts while I was working on other games, so I just wanted to post it and get it over with. But im happy I was able to convey the mystery and wanting to get to know the character. I wanted the game to be able to convey his mental health and I guess the plot to it. For the future of this game I’m planning on updating it after I make a few more visual novels. Then it can be easier to make and I can see what needs work.
Also I LOVE the fic you wrote. You have a good way with words!