I really like the games you make, so I guess I'm already bias - lol. You have a great sense of making the player wonder 'what's going to happen next?'.
I can see from this entry, clearly there was a lot of potential ideas planned but I think time was just too much of a factor to get everything in this time. Even the game characters themselves are apologetic for the love tunnel not being finished... Clearly given more time this would be another brilliant game of wonderment, and I honestly hope you continue with it. Even on this one, you had me wondering down an empty tunnel for about 10 minutes (with the 'do not enter' sign...) just to see if there was anything down there - lol.
Great voice acting, superb atmosphere and nice interactions... just needed more time.