Thank you for your feedback! Sadly, as the writer of the project, I am naturally biased towards the text being prominently displayed as a central component of the game. I do see where you're coming from, though! It would be very nifty if we could somehow fuse the two together, but I feel the ship on that has, sadly, sailed...
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Yeah, I got the feeling you were coming at this from a text-only background. Even though the ship has probably sailed on making it an actual comic book, I think you'd still benefit a lot from doing an editing pass to remove stuff that the art is already telling the player. Although you should probably do some A/B testing with a few select scenes instead of just taking my word for it.