This isn't bad for your first project. I liked the music and the art style it had. I understood the premise of the game, but I didn't understand how I could win or lose the game. I think defining those conditions would make a massive difference. Great job and keep working hard!
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the music is not mine(i credited them in the menu) but thanks for the feedback, originally i wanted to add a timer for the lose condition but couldn't figure out a good time as it sometimes made it too trivial or too hard, in the end the game did become a did grindy but that was due to frustration of me not able figuring out the menu and not wanting to work on the game no longer as i had other ideas. I wanted to work on it a full month but gave up in 9-10 days. Once again thanks for the feedback