Couldn't finish it in an hour, so my feedback is based only on what I saw.
Things I liked about the game:
- Compelling story & interesting characters
- Good mystery game mechanics
- Good use of the VX Ace BGM
Things I didn't like:
- There appear to be skills that you can level up, but it's not clear whether I should be trying to grind a certain skill up somehow or become a generalist
- I see I can buy items and I can sell items, but I'm not sure if I might be selling something that will be useful later
- Stray pixels in the birds' map sprites are annoying
I may be rating at the hour mark, but I want to come back and see the game through to the end some day. It's quite good, especially considering it was made in a month. Were it not for the story being so HawkZombie-centric I would advocate this project be polished and made into a commercial release. Good job, Sith (Dora)!