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Quite a humorous text based adventure. Story was fun and seemed quite interesting, it felt like it came up with new ways to describe things at every turn!

Text based games are not quite my style so I didn't get through this entirely, it's definitely a lot of reading so one has to be very into it to follow through. That said it's still a really well written project, more so than most! I like how the choices that were added in for variety but don't go anywhere were very quick to get through instead of taking me on a whole red herring of an adventure, it definitely helps with pacing a ton.

Really well made!

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I'm glad you liked it, even if you weren't its exact target audience.

I've found that Twine is a very convenient engine, with many ways to do the same thing. This makes it extraordinarily easy to get into, if you've got the ability to write a bit. Being a writer, I had that.

Its weakness is that while it's technically possible to make any game out of nothing but links (not even using any math), that makes for a rather bad game if there needs to be dynamic elements. I got my start in twine from hacking another game, so the first thing I learned was the math rather than the story elements.

If you like my style of humor but would rather not read as much, another game I've made, Yuri My Beloved, may be more your speed. It's a shame it was made in january, because while it took 2 weeks to this one's 5 days, I can confidently say it's ~100x better. A proper game rather than a text adventure.