We had the same idea of animating our music's signatures
The Latin (?) lyrics set the tone. Classically, I would have used organ and horns to accompany. The fact that you put in swell trumpets surprised me, and even pleasantly surprised me!
The impact and the suspended transition at 1'30" are fantastic!
The D part (which is the breathing part) is well placed to kick-start the C* part. I think it would have been good for the construction to have another quieter (and probably shorter) part a little earlier in your music. Personally, I'd have muted the drum between 1'07"-1'14".
I'm taking the liberty of giving my opinion because I think you make great music and I modestly hope to help you become even better.