First of all, this is an impressive achievement considering your level of experience. It really got me into the mood (and I had that "now I wanna try getting a pilot license" kind of feel) and I gave this 30 minutes but couldn't achieve much after managing to take off (which took about 20 minutes). I think the issue is that page 2 instructions are unclear, page 1 was pretty ok. If you provide exact steps needed to progress the story (just what to do without pilot lingo) I'll be really happy to give it another try.
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Haha thanks. I was pretty concerned about having people get off track, and I planned on flushing out the radio system a bit more to have tower tell you when you are off course, however the code was a mess and I ended up running out of time before implementing it. I also wished I had flushed the checklist out a bit more and had been a little more ham-fisted with the hints but I wanted to keep "muh immersion" so I sort of shot myself in the foot there. I appreciate the feedback though!