I love the time-travel setting here. There's a lot of detail in very little space. The "intro" part is formatted a bit oddly - the title is zalgo text that's hard to read; it'd be hard to use a printout of this without the context of the game page. And the intro paragraphs are in an odd spot for a beginning - I skipped over that at first; it didn't have a "start here" look to it.
But once I got past that, I enjoyed reading. This'd be a very fun adventure to spring on a group not expecting it; the layout is simple once it's known but I could see it being wonderfully confusing to a group of PCs.