Not too bad.
Some very rushed moments and strange actions that partially can be explained by whatever translation mechanism was used.
Mostly I liked the MC and his sister, although if she's supposed to be stuttering the whole time, you can't tell except when the bullies are parroting how she's apparently supposed to sound.
I also liked that none of the women were unnaturally large. Even the largest felt reasonable, and the rest were actually quite nicely "normal" compared to most AVNs.
The women working at this hotel are very strange. You can't avoid the interaction with the diving instructor, which is fine, but why allow avoiding the manager then? Still, I'm glad you can avoid her ... she's kinda awful. I wonder if she actually doesn't like their father.
Maeve is interesting too. The fact that she doesn't even have private thoughts about MC after catching him fucking the air (and not staying long enough to see floating cum) even at home while talking to him on the phone seems like either that was already forgotten when the rest of her scenes were written or she's not supposed to realize it was still him in the room when she came back? Which is also weird.
Anyway, I'll check out chapter 2, but the game needs either a better translator or someone to review all the English translation and make adjustments. But it also could use some work on the pacing and some continuity control. I do like that Maeve's dad is the cop that found Andrea ... it's a nice binding thread. Still, if Sadie and the diving instructor are more indicative of the way the story is going to go, not sure how much more I'll play. We'll see.