Nice twist at the end! The interaction between Brookes and the Sergeant really sets the tone. The grimdark vibe comes through well, though the story feels a bit familiar in terms of setting and plot. Nice job on keeping the dialogue crisp!
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Thanks! I had an outline idea then did some research as TBH I don't know enough of the in-depth lore etc. for OPR / 40k Inquisition, which I would have liked to include. Even though i wanted to add more, I ran out of time unfortunately. So I kept the setting to the one location and sprinkled in some lore :)
Thanks for taking the time to comment and give constructive feedback.