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Not negative at all, I understand exactly what you're saying, the word constraint really limited on what I could show vs tell and that's often just because writing a description of the picture and emotions it caused is way more words than saying "The picture made me feel sad"  type of deal.

I think, there was a way I could have blended the two better but then it came down to a timing constraint, which I'm hoping to be able to work on next time. 

I'm really glad you enjoyed my story!