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I got my partner to give it a try! They died after bumping into your Monster! but it was fun they got to experience the game in a really easily laid out manner. So Kudos! 

By the way give it a read over you have a few small mistakes in spelling. Thank you for the content can't wait to see what you make in the future! 

Very nicely laid out, and my first game went really good, I was surprised it went that well, just means for me the creator of this really thought a lot on how they made the game and the different things you can go down and lucky dice.

Loved it completely and took me a little less than 20 minutes total, would be a game I'd get someone to play so they can understand MB better. 

Thanks!

thank you so much 

Thank you so much 😁 I'll be releasing the Army book for these guys soon! 

Not negative at all, I understand exactly what you're saying, the word constraint really limited on what I could show vs tell and that's often just because writing a description of the picture and emotions it caused is way more words than saying "The picture made me feel sad"  type of deal.

I think, there was a way I could have blended the two better but then it came down to a timing constraint, which I'm hoping to be able to work on next time. 

I'm really glad you enjoyed my story!  

Amazing story, was hooked through the whole thing! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! 

This story honestly crushed it! 

I felt this had a solid adherence to the theme and was super original but the flow fell short when reading it. Great story overall! 

The flow felt a little off for me, but I did enjoy the story overall and felt it aligned well with the theme.

Enjoyed the ending, and the lead up to it was very well done. You're lead to believe one thing is true and at the end you learn the truth even though it doesn't matter. 

This was rather enjoyable to read, gave me Hitchhikers guide vibes and personally I think that fits amazingly well with what's being told here. 

Thank you so much means a lot!