Wow the look and design of this one is so good!! It looks really polished and readable. The decaying oxygen and health mechanic was really clever and original! It worked, felt pretty fair but added an element of pressure. I don't love that the timer keeps going when you're reading a text box. I think sometimes that's okay, but if there's multiple instances of a lot of reading and it's all under a timer I just end up missing info cuz I'm skimming. But the writing was good, I felt like I knew what I was supposed to be doing all the time. I liked how dialogue changed on certain items as I progressed in the story, updating me on what to do next etc. (like look for the pick in the bunker type hints, super useful). Loved the look of it, very cohesive. Good job!!
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We're really glad you enjoyed it!! Regarding the timers, they do pause at certain moments that we consider necessary, mainly during conversations, the PC puzzle, and text from the file. We'll add pauses to a few more moments where they might come in handy. Thank you very much for taking the time to give us such detailed feedback.