If you're using the word "yapping", it's hard to take your feedback seriously. "Yapping" is not a valid criticism of writing. If you could explain it in a truly constructive way and show us where you believe we could improve, that would be truly useful.
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sorry, personally i think the plot has potential however i think it's a little predictable also just the chunk where they're dancing in the elevator is a bit unessicary and just more to skip though and i personally found it a little unbearable also not to shame the artists but you could improve by adding more expressions and more detailed backrounds
Thanks for the actual feedback! The plot definitely isn't the strongest, and I agree that there's a lot that could be improved. In regards to the art, that's mostly just because of a lack of time, we didn't properly get started until the last week of the jam and one our artists was sick and unable to work for portions of the jam which definitely contributed to the lack of expressions and backgrounds. We'll definitely take your feedback into consideration for our future games!