Wow, this is one of the kindest reviews I've ever gotten. Thanks so much for taking the time to write your thoughts!
The erotic games I like the best are ones that take place in a relatively grounded world. It's all about context for me... kinky scenes in a world where everything is sex-crazed madness all the time anyway just don't hit the same as they would in a world where everybody is otherwise fairly rational and realistic. When I was designing the game, putting the wilder scenes in the context of a pretty grounded life sim sandbox just seemed like the thing to do to get the erotic stuff to stand out.
I'm glad you haven't found any grammar errors! I do make mistakes but I try to catch them. :) Before this game my main "line of work" was writing erotica, so mostly it's just a lot of practice. Bugs certainly do happen though!
Please don't feel bad about not being able to offer monetary support. I'm very grateful and appreciative of the people who choose to support me in that way — I literally couldn't be doing this without them — but I know very, very well what it's like to be in a position where there just isn't anything to spare. I don't expect anybody to put themselves in a bad position just to help me, but I truly do appreciate the thought. Spreading the word about the game is also an enormous help!
The Harasser and Admirer will both get large revisions in the upcoming major update (0.5). I have plans for the roommate and their partner too... I don't think they'll make it in right away but probably in an immediate followup (say, 0.5.1). I hope you'll like the direction they go in!