I love the chord progression choice, the clear structure, the melodic theme is very recognizable. To me the only thing that hurts the song is the shy and undermixed singing, you voice is okay dude, get along with it.
Thanks. I think recording my voice was probably the part of this I was the most nervous about, since I don't have a lot of experience with live recording in general, but overall I'm glad I tried. Perhaps once the judging period is over I'll go back and rerecord.
