I like the division of the song into two parts (Hanged Man, and Sun); this makes commenting easier and fits given their different nature.
Hanged Man: I love the freeform nature of this song, with slow-downs and diverse sections. It does feel consistent and has a great transition to the next part (Sun). Also, I am always irrationally afraid when I throw a cymbal in my song that people get annoyed by it - you remind me that I was worried for nothing: you bombarded me with cymbals and I loved it! Really cool :)
Sun: Wow, I love the intro! The rise with the drums and synth are really cool. The rest of the song is also quite cool - you nail this 'Rock' vibe, which I couldn't even dream of producing.
You should be proud of this project, it sounds like it took you a long time to make. Really nice entry :D