Am I missing something or huuh? Why so few ratings? You deserve a great deal more for this beautiful composition! I feel you caught a great many emotions in this short track. I feel we went with a similar approach of trying to fit different moods in our 2 minutes, cramming it all in there. ^^ And I think it all works very well together! Aprupt start, maybe, but I find that works quite well, throwing you right into the action. I also feel soundcloud isn't doing you wonders in that regard tho, there's some weird thing where the song doesn't start exactly at 0, so I always add like a second of silence when I render to soundcloud.
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Oh thank you so much for the kind words! Yea you're totally right on the intro. I try to write organically, so refining things on short deadlines is something I've been really wanting to get down. In the same vein though, I'm really glad to hear the emotional range came across. I'll leave more thoughts on your post, but I regret missing the chance to vote, I feel the same way about yours! I think it's cool we both took that approach. And I'll keep the soundcloud tip in mind, thanks!