Oh thank you so much for the kind words! Yea you're totally right on the intro. I try to write organically, so refining things on short deadlines is something I've been really wanting to get down. In the same vein though, I'm really glad to hear the emotional range came across. I'll leave more thoughts on your post, but I regret missing the chance to vote, I feel the same way about yours! I think it's cool we both took that approach. And I'll keep the soundcloud tip in mind, thanks!