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Hello! 👋

Positive: ✨

  • The paper art style is absolutely charming and unique!
  • The music fits perfectly with the game's atmosphere.
  • The eraser mechanic to erase projectiles is a unique and new idea to me.

Improvements: ⚙️

  • UI Clutter: The screen is a bit cluttered with UI elements, which makes the play area quite small. Consider streamlining the UI to give players more room to maneuver.
  • Colliders: The colliders (either player or projectile) seemed a bit unforgiving. Usually, it's better to make them smaller in these types of games, but maybe I just need more practice! 😅
  • Bug Fix: The game occasionally crashes with an HTML-related error. This might be something on my side, but I haven't experienced it with other WebGL builds.

Great job on the game! This brought back some nostalgia from playing paper jumper. Looking forward to seeing more from you! 👏

Thank you for your well listed out feedback and kind words! I am glad to hear you like the art style! Fun fact about the collider of the player. I already made it smaller haha. But I can understand since you need to cramp yourself in between obstacles. Will take note for next time!