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Hi The Stag

I like the concept of the game, the phone interface and idea of corrupting the girlfriend, not going all the way immediately (but see after). At least I like what I understand of it and where it seems to me where it goes. The history seems well build up for now and some choice with “impact” for example, the choice about who will receive a photo ;)

My feedback and ideas about it.

I find it "too straight forward" to sex. For a girlfriend who discover the thing it is going very quickly. For me it needs more build up like getting her used to be exposed and groped before. Sex will be a natural evolution with the same slow thing as actual.

Also get the bestie more involved, having more exchange with the boyfriend, girlfriend does not know everything about those.

Examples:

bestie sending photo of the groping while the first dance at the bar at the same time to the boyfriend trying to make him jealous. Or may be bring her in club before for dancing with the “slutty” dress the girlfriend did not buy.
wardrobe malfunction (accidental or provoked by bestie) in the bar or at work with photo sent to girlfriend which report it to boyfriend. And may be bestie to boyfriend special photo unknow to the girlfriend.
changeroom exposure while trying new underware with photo of boys looking at her, bestie asking to boyfriend before the go or describing what is happening.
Bestie staying around while first meeting with her male friend instead of going for an errand. She takes photo thru window for boyfriend secretly after girlfriend leaving for going home.

All this to make the girlfriend with at ease being looked at, exposed, or being groped before going for more physical things.

And to get the bestie/boyfriend relation more like a way to manipulate girlfriend.

Do the next version will have some "skip to new content" thing ? Way to get back some save ? Handle different saves for different path/choices ?

I hope this feedback will not be taken badly.

Le Stag120 days ago(+2)

Thanks for your feedback! Don't worry, I'm not taking constructive criticism badly. ;)

I'm a bit hesitant to expand the "before sex" portion, because I fear it may make people leave if they don't get fast enough to the "good bits". I'll have to see how much I can expand it, because I agree with you, it's still too fast.

meuh_trash120 days ago (2 edits)

Thx :)
That's why I talked about the bestie, may be it can be spicy enough ? :)

But depends of what you want about your game, a fast one to the action or a more buildup one.
For me the blowjob is "already" some sex, not the full intercourse but already intimate a lot...

May be you have to ask to your patreon about what we think about this.

A way to keep some is may be to add 1 chapter in the progress of the story and 1 in the buildup at each release or something like that ?
But may be at least one more chapter in the build up involving the bestie and some "forced" exposure at some shopping ?

Tengrikun113 days ago(+1)

Hmn Maybe to help with both sides of the argument have her first "cheat" be with the bf but she's blindfolded and something happens mid way to relax her like she realizes it's him because the blindfold slips etc. This would build the trust with her bestie who imo would arrange the "meat up." Excuse the pun, not the biggest NTR fan but I did check it out and thought you did great, hopefully this helps and while I know it might be hard to edit the script to allow for a different first screen in my mind it seemed plausible enough to still get some "action" for those in need of immediate gratification.

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