Thank you for leaving your thoughts in such detail. The community gave me the chance to work on the DLC, so I'm going all out on it. The redraws are based on the character's past designs and my envisions. I try to draw out their charms while sticking true to their character. I appreciate any critique because I want to keep improving my work.
I work with a few proofreaders, but we may have missed some word choices. I agree that "bothering" sounds too mild in that context. Right now, I've got plenty of help with proofreading, but if you're interested to help in other ways, feel free to join my discord server: https://discord.gg/46EBzR47