Thanks so much for checking out and playing my game! I just watched the stream and it was so fun! I loved the story crafting throughout that you did and final story was amazing!
From what I could tell, I think you got the majority of the rules correct while playing. One thing I noticed: during the Cast phase, you only add cards to the Guard hands when their total is below 17. And you never have to add a card to your own hand during the Cast phase.
I really appreciate you spending time with my game!