It was very nice, I'm so intrigueted to the story.
The flow was exciting, and I was completely merged into the story, the art is very nice and cool and fit perfectly the kinda of game/story you want to tell.
Some parts can look messy and divergent in same points, but at the end all comes together with everything you experienced before. It was a nice adventure, I really enjoyed reading it, the end is spectacular as the input of the "Imaginary friend"; nice work, for the art and the narrative part.
I would also mention the sounds, and the musics helped a lot of keeping me locked into the screen and wanted to reach the end of the story