Very cool execution of the concept! The only thing I would add is subtitles, maybe over the character's head? I have trouble with auditory processing and missed the Diary reads the first time around.
Thank you for the great suggestion! I hadn't thought of that, but subtitles would have been a sweet addition, actually. If I update the game after the jam, I will be sure to add this feature. Thank you for taking the time to play my game!