I loved everything about it! atmosphere, characters, art, music, plot twist, references to Mass Effect (was the captain really a Paragon then, heheh), achievements and mechanics. You did a great job and I am so impressed this is a game jam submission — it looks so polished!
Also your French Pan logo is super cute ^^
I was a bit sad to get my ending, as by that moment the story had really engaged me :) It would be great to know how it continues!