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I'm not?  I commented about the things that were done poorly, you know. Kinda what this entire feed is for.   Reviewing the game. 

Lol 

No.  However, I've played at least 10 other games from this very site that were much more well done, there are a few that are fucking masterpieces.  Great story, great artwork, great writing.

This game barely even runs properly

 🤷

Hasn't seen an itch update since last year, patreon is more recent tho.  For those of us who play the public updates, is there any plan to release here?  

Broken, buggy and just downright poorly coded.  

Save function missing or broken altogether, have to "skip" the day instead of sleeping cause the bed doesn't trigger like 99% of other VN's.

Story repeats itself in certain places like a broken record, other places it won't even trigger the next flag.

Just started this not too long ago.  Only came here to say.

BEST FUCKING RICKROLL EVER!!

I laughed so hard I scared the shit outta my dogs. XD

thank you for that. lmao.

Alright, back to the story now.. XD

First tried this a WHILE ago, and it was really good.  but the fact that it's such a small release so far and hasn't received ANY news updates or posts in half a year is a little concerning.  Hope it's not abandoned.

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Why the hell does it matter?  Frankly it's not your business.

Yeah, that makes me lose any interest, and frankly I wish I could get a damn refund.

waste of my time

I'll check it out. thanks :)

Just tried this, and yeah I would have to say it is FAR from being a polished/finished product.  There are still the floating dick bugs as mentioned above. as well as some LUA/Scripting errors and other minor things I've noticed while playing this game.    Are you done working on this?

I've NEVER seen NTR mean something else in the AVN world.  I think it's safe to assume yes.

abandonware??

nearly 3 years since last update,  I feel it's safe to assume this is abandonware.

been a year..  still waiting on that news...   How soon are we talking?  next century?

Hasnt been updated in 2 years,  Not wasting my time looking for a patreon to see if dev is still active.  Does anyone know if this is abandonware??

Holy fucking thread necro batman LMFAO.

this is the second time someone has raised this tread from the dead well after a year of inactivity in two years. LMFAO.

for reference we ALL stopped replying to this loser because he's clearly a headcase with delusions of grandeur, thinking he's so clever in his replies.  You're better off beating your head against a brick wall than engaging with this rampant fuck knuckle,

Holy word salad batman.

This made no fuckin sense lol

Hello.  Enjoying so far, however I received this error when trying to view the PeepABoo stream.

|| [code]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 670, in execute_call_screen

    store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/common/00action_control.rpy", line 131, in __call__

    renpy.show_screen(self.screen, *self.args, **self.kwargs)

Exception: Screen [starpage_streams] is not known.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "desktop_websites.rpyc", line 95, in script

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2259, in execute

    self.call("execute")

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2241, in call

    return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\statements.py", line 342, in call

    return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 670, in execute_call_screen

    store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\exports.py", line 3347, in call_screen

    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse="screen", type="screen", roll_forward=roll_forward)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\ui.py", line 299, in interact

    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 3582, in interact

    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 4543, in interact_core

    rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1179, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1179, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1179, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\screen.py", line 770, in event

    rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1179, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1403, in event

    rv = super(Window, self).event(ev, x, y, st)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 281, in event

    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1179, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1179, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 1142, in event

    return handle_click(self.clicked)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 1075, in handle_click

    rv = run(action)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 372, in run

    new_rv = run(i, *args, **kwargs)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 379, in run

    return action(*args, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/common/00action_control.rpy", line 131, in __call__

    renpy.show_screen(self.screen, *self.args, **self.kwargs)

  File "D:\--Games--\--NSFW--\--New and Untested--\CommandingAHarem-1.0.5-win\renpy\display\screen.py", line 1220, in show_screen

    raise Exception("Screen %s is not known.\n" % (name[0],))

Exception: Screen [starpage_streams] is not known.

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64

Ren'Py 8.1.3.23091805

 1.0.5

Sun Dec 31 10:55:14 2023

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||

It is rare to find an AVN so well written that I'm actually counting the days till the next release.

In my opinion Evermore stands with the AVN greats. (Leap of Faith, Oppai Oddysey, Eternum, and being a dik)

Awesome job!

But, other than that minor detail, I really enjoyed the game so far.  Kinda need a bed in the MC's house, and a storage chest/working firepit would be great as well.

But all in all, a pretty solid base to work from.

I do hope you plan on expanding the map at some point as the current map is very small.

Appreciate the reply  I will wait till it's patched.  I dislike having to rely on constant quicksaves.

I tried to enjoy this, I really did.  But being shoehorned into what seems like a 480x720 resolution. (On a 4k screen) really ruined this for me.

I tried ignoring that, but only got maybe 10 minutes into the game before deleting it entirely.  The world map is way too confusing.  almost ALL of the rooms look identical, making it nearly impossible to judge my location on the ship without keeping a mental map at all times.  It's easy to get turned around and end up in the wrong room.

Those two factors kept me from even getting into the story.

Was enjoying it until I was out exploring and found a damn bear. It's impossible to kill with only the starter hammer and it follows you TO THE END of the damn map.  I tried luring it to the wolves, to see if they'd fight and I could escape.  Nope, they ALL started following me, to the end of the map. Tried luring them to town to see if the merchant's bodyguard would kill them.  

NOPE!  Just stood there like a moron as I'm getting yeeted by bear and wolves.

I could not escape from them AT ALL.

Immediately uninstalled as that bricked a save I had 2 hours into already.  

Please limit the follow distance of the animals, or make the bodyguard do her damn job...

Not sure if it's a bug, or something else.  But about 5 min in, there seems to be some dialogue missing in the conversation between the lady in the dream (before waking up to Neko)

and then a few more small bits that just don't seem to flow from scene to scene very well.

but the one that actually made me close the game down entirely was upon meeting the red demon lady, after subsquent H-Scene she asks about the "Bathing facilities"  then it seems to cut to some random dialogue in a cave, then skips again to some other previously unknown character.   It happens so suddenly and there's so much missing context it completely pulled me outta the story and I lost all interest.

Again, not sure if it's a bug or just poor writing, but it really threw me.

Also for the record I have triple checked that none of the skipping options were enabled.  Especially transitions. (FAR from my first renpy game)

Wait, recently updated?   I thought this game was finished.  Am I missing something?

Has not been updated in almost a year.  Is this abandoned?

It's in my top 5 as well.. where exactly it sit's I'm not entirely sure. IT's a close tie with Being a DIK, Fates Collide, Maids and Maidens, and Tales of Unity.

Devs will ALWAYS lose my support when they go from a free download to a pay per update platform.  I have no issues supporting devs, but randomly switching from a free download to pay per update without any warning is a scam in my eyes.  If you wanted to charge for this, should have done so from the get-go.  Or done a free trial with a notice that we will need to pay to finish the story.

Too many abandoned games where the devs took the money and ran. I don't trust it.

I liked this story, but refuse to pay for it after you've already had it for free for a year with absolutely no hints or notices about future plans to charge.  IDC if it's only five bucks per episode.  it's the concept of honesty and accountability.

You lost a fan moonmi.  And I'm positive I'm not the only one.  WE are your bread and butter as an indy dev. 

Holy thread necro batman.  I totally forgot about this whole shitshow..  After re-reading it all over again. I'm fully confident that this person is a total fucking moron with nothing better to do than start shit with people online over a fucking story.  Therapy wont help this loser, the only solution for this level of aggressive stupidity is 9mm in diameter and roughly 2 inches long.  

I refuse to lower myself to this fool's level any longer.  

I'm confused about the downloads.  what is the difference between the PC and Android versions?  they have different revision numbers.  

Also do I need to extract season 1 and 2 into separate folders or can I extract them both into the same folder before launching the first time?

Considering downloading this, but it's been almost a year since the last update.  is it worth my time/bandwidth or is this yet another abandoned project?

Look, this game is good.  It's fun, quirky and fairly well made.  However it sure as fuck is not worth 25 dollars PER episode lol.  I respect the work you put into this, but what kinda drugs are you on that you expect ppl to pay 25 dollars for every new update on here.

You can buy fully animated, fully voiced and better developed games for less than this on steam.  This is easily one of the most pricey VN's on this site, and that's per episode.  

I have no problems paying to support a dev when I feel it's worth it, but not when they appear so greedy.  I'll stick to the free version lol

I normally try to remain respectful, but man, You're smoking crack if you think that's a fair price.

With the amount of effort taken to post this copy and pasted crap, you could have just answered the question lol

Ok, I have played at least a hundred different VN's from Itch, and this game surprised me. I don't easily get hooked on a story and this game just floored me with how well it was written.  The animations and characters are absolutely flawless.  The story is riveting and involving.  This just made my top 3 favorite VN list.  Superb work.  I rarely pay money to support devs on here. (not due to choice but rather necessity as my financial status is not the greatest) but I will be either subbing to your patreon or at the very least paying per episode release here on itch. (Still undecided)

I know that english is not your primary language, and some of the english translations were a little rough, but not enough to drive me away or ruin my interest in the story.

My only (possible) complaints are as follows

[1:] In the early chapters of the game, there's very little face time with a few of the girls. (Amy, Betty and Maya)  A few pick up later, but it seems out of the blue due to the length of time without them having any screen time.

[2:]  in the chapter 2-3 transition several of the scenes seem kindof forced, as they had no real plot builup for them, they were just shoehorned in.  Not enough to ruin my enjoyment, but enough to make me scratch my head a bit,

[3:] I was never interested in pursuing a relationship with Monica, and never made any choices to pursue one.  However I did choose to kiss her on the cheek when she was upset about something.  I saw it as more of a friendly, comforting gesture and not a romantic one, however due to that ONE choice out of several I could have made, but did not.  I was railroaded into a relationship with her in chapter 3, which gave zero option to stop pursuing her.  I have no desire to pursue her, but I was already several hours into the story and didn't want to start from scratch.  This might be something to take into consideration for future releases.  To either give a civil way to break it off for those of us that did choose the "kiss on cheek" option, but saw it as a comforting gesture and not a romantic one, or better illustrate the actual repercussions of that action when the choice is available.

other than those 3 issues, I absolutely love it so far.  I did have a question though.

Is it going to have Harem options?  or will pursuing multiple women end with a "bad" ending?  I can see a few not being okay with harem. Mainly Yui, cause she's hella jealous lol.  But With Betty/Phoebe/Amy and possibly even Alice, I could see them being okay with a Harem.

Just curious is all. 

Sorry for writing you a book, and thank you again for this awesome work.

Life always comes first.  Take care of yourself.  I love the story so far, I want you at your best so your work is at it's best. (Not that my opinion matters lol)

Hope the situation with your parents' job situation improves too.. That's rough.

Best Wishes

Yeah, Imma be honest with you pal.  I'm not reading all of that.  What little I did read, further shows me your mentality.  I refuse to fall down this rabbit hole.  The fact you had to debate the semantics of grammar, instead of understanding the that term "unfaithful" is used extensively by millions of people to describe a cheating partner.    I will say this though, yes, she should have been faithful, for no other reason than there is ABSOLUTELY no excuse to cheat on your partner.  None, zip, zilch, nada.   If she was unhappy, then she needs to communicate that with her partner, not bottle it up until she explodes and goes out and fucks another man.  Or divorce her husband.  Either one would have been a better solution than cheating.  If you truly cannot comprehend that one simple fact, than I weep for anyone unfortunate enough to enter into a relationship with you, because you have the emotional maturity of a toddler.  

That is all I will say.  I'm done with this pointless exchange, since it's clear to me that either you're truly ignorant of how healthy adult relationships work, you're a troll, or you're just an idiot.  Not really sure which at this point, although I have a small idea.  

Toodles

Wait, you're charging for this now?  I played the 1st version for free.  And with what appears to be a once per year update seeing as on your patreon you focus mainly on MNF, (which I honestly enjoyed playing last time I tried it.)  I would say charging more than some other devs on this site do for less content and even less active update?  Hard pass..    It's a shame, because I did enjoy this game when I played it, but paying/donating for an unfinished product that barely receives work is a lot to ask.

If I may suggest, either putting this project on hold entirely until you can focus more attention on updating it, or remove the 8 dollar price tag for something that so far has only been updated twice  in more than a year