Actually very fun, hope for a full release soon.
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I thought I wrote this review years ago. I genuinely love this game and its core mechanic. You really do feel like a danger to yourself and others after all you've been through, uncertain if the protagonist is being chased by other warriors looking to be the strongest, or simply someone so obsessed with strength and so broken by a combination of war and the need to constantly prove himself that he's lost touch with reality, lashing out in violent, unpredictable ways.
This game is short, but its so good. It's worth a play.
Very cool concept, good gameplay - difficult but very fun. The core idea is excellent. Love the concept. Would be perfect if they just feminized into trans women instead of being transformed into cis women but the feminization thing is a huge plus in general. The harem formed entirely of feminized former cis men is a thing that just doesn't get done ever and I'm here for it.
Deeply enthusiastic about future updates.
I didn't expect to appreciate this game so much. The people behind this game are wonderful and I'm glad they exist. The fact that this is a free game with no ads or anything on the app store is a breath of fresh air and I just appreciate this so much. It's not even my kind of game but every time I see something like this I'm reminded that if you wanna find something beautiful in gaming you often have to look to the indie dev space.
This project could use a native English speaker to proofread some of those phrases that are clearly off. But the art is pretty amazing. There are a lot of weird phrases that definitely give me the 'English is a second or third language vibe but the game delivers on what it offers regardless so if the grammar can be fixed I think it'd go from good to really good.
Decent continuation of the first game. Glad to see both returning and new characters, and I'm a fan of Ingrid. It's a format that probably doesn't get taken advantage of as much as it should, and there's a surprising amount of art in there for such a simple game. Eager to see where Ingrid's arc goes.
Yeah I kinda always hate stuff like that in VNs, it's like authors wanna have their incest fetish but won't admit to it and I wish they'd just own up to it. It's fake, just enjoy it. I played another game that had this problem. The default options were like 'landlady' and 'roommate' but the dialogue as written were clearly meant to be 'mother' and 'sister'.
The hentai could use some work but it's actually a pretty okay rogue-like when it gets updated. Normally my complaints are about the core gameplay loop but that's genuinely the fun part for once which is refreshing for one of these games. I realize this might be a personal taste but the hentai parts aren't that involved and don't offer much of interest outside of the animation. A bit more text going over the action could go a long way.
TL;DR
Big positives:
God the new weapon is fun.
The new level is fun.
Overall the gameplay loop is solid
Could use work:
H-scenes are kinda just a gif with very little text.
Not the worst problem to have because writing is cheap.
I'd give an opinion on the writing but I like some story with my porn and this mostly appears to be free use fetish material from start to finish. If that's your thing this is for you but the general lack of an actual story behind 'go train yourself to fuck people' kinda wore thin after the first title to do it for me.
It's a shame too because the art is top knotch.
Still just starting the game but I have useful feedback relating to the early stages:
The writing is great! You could definitely use some set piece CGs to go with the longer segmets of the game that stretch out in a single place This would be especially helpful in the portion of the game that is simply T H E H A L L A W A Y. CGs for individual scenes with the girls would also be nice, but I imagine that'll probably be something you're planning on filling out as the budget increases. Frankly, I like the entire vibe so far. Good music, good writing, interesting art direction. I know these projects are expensive and you appear to be in it for what seems to be enjoyment of the story you're telling here. I have similar aspirations so I can relate.
TL;DR: Love the writing and music choices. What art is there is great but I think more of it would be helpful for both immersion and attention spans. Commissioning this stuff obviously takes time and money though. Keep it up, will be monitoring this project closely as I'm enthusiastic for its future.
For those wondering where the updates are, just worth mentioning that the author mentioned having to flee their home after russia invaded ukraine. They have confirmed they are safe but it might be a while. This would also probably be an excellent time to throw the author some patron money if you like the game to assist with transitional costs.