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How being manly and ugly is woke?

I tought that theory was all about over feminizing men (cuz a delicate man can still look manly and use a GUN) and stuff, relax, we love ourselves and love what we are, men, simply men

Thou has bad taste

He sexy AF, wTFdym?

Ngl, it better when they are humans, as my idea of a good Isekai/Lost MC in a VN has the MC being a human so we see how one of us would survive the story

I mean, IDK, I just feel its a little weird, like, I dont complain of magic or clothes, but IDK, I feel is hot when you see stuff and It makes a perfect sense in the mind, or IDK, the game does not need to change, I just believe it could be hot if some guys muscles were nerfed for aesthetics, still being Bara of course, Bara men are still hot, dont get me wrong

I respect your opinion too, but I dont mean that the Bara is the problem, I mean more of logics, I mean, the bara is valid, but muscles are unbalanced, to me, Bara is when you see guys on top condition having romance, but in this case the downside is that it maybe goes a little over the lines of bara, making it really uncomfortable for some in some instances

I can make a comparision, the Blacksmith is one of those who are unbalanced and have muscles that dont make a lot of sense, while the lizard hunter of the swamp is great because his anatomy is bigger, but balanced, making it more appealing

My point is that you can survive a night with the lizard, but not with the blacksmith

This is my opinion, The game's story is great, and the characters are very likeable

But in the downside, I feel the designs sizes should be normalized, they are buffer than they should, like, how are you supposed to survive a night with them?

I mean, if they are big its ok, but the musculature feels unbalanced sometimes like with the blacksmith

At least with the human characters, Lycans and Lizardmen look more realistic somehow as their proportions feel more balanced

I feel like female designs are more appealing on this game as they feel more realistic and inmersive on the sizes

It is

By disgrace, it does not seem posible, each route is like a very long chapter

Havent played yet, but I'm sure its going to be the bomb

whaaaaa?

dude, this is cool

Looks good, just that about the artstyle, its weird, they have bodies of men and faces of Kids, you should check that

Maybe he still writes the thing, or he is waiting to give a full release

I like the game, hehe, but I have a question, did the protagonist always 

(Spoiler Warning)

Did the MC always enrraged in the 3rd day?
I could swear he was crying when I readed it first time, maybe I were very tired as I readed this at night, tbh, Idk, I liked it, but if it never happened then I guess its fine

Get 100% of the game and you will find why you dont want that

That can explain why HE knows about what to do with the EYE

Damn... Thats duckin' true...

I can say for sure he was a complete d--k, like, if THAT  was his final breaking point I can say Teak was a complete hipocrite, He litterally Logged on Shelter, attacked the main Mechanic even if the guy himself did not had a f--king idea of what he was, harrased the main chief of social relations, got a lot of friends and admirers and got a big dog as captain of his party, and the jerk had the AUDACITY of get in the worst moment posible with the main dogs and the dude who LITTERALLY RUNS THE PLACE ALONE just to tell them, NO, BOSS THEM, to get the human out just because he got all conspiranoic

Damn, he sure was an ungrateful idiot, hot or not, he never wanted to live, he was just a spiteful bastard, I guess people who ask the Route have not made the 100% of the game

Yeah, haha, Its just a starwars joke like: "Join the Dark Side... We have smoothies...

It seems he joined the "dark side"... nice :v

Without being disrespectful, I think its fine in various aspects but it needs fixes in some stuff as a lot of people say, but about the speed, well, I can say that visual novels are slower than the average story because they can use more time telling stuff than comics, Tv Shows and Animated Series, given the ability of showing more with less resources, and also, that the player can read it calmly or extremely fast but looking at the pictures, I can recomend that it should take its time to move and just describe more the stuff, like, more dialogue, and maybe longer descriptions because the dialogues dont need an entire drawing to have the characters talking

Also, the characters are bigger than they should, I recomend making them X1.25 or X1.5 the size of a human being, because in real life its probable that a lot of them would not be taller than 2.72 meters (Higher recorded in human history [AKA: Extremely Rare])

Also... MC's Name is weird, Who calls someone like that in this world?
In fantasy is posible, but not in our Normal Land [xl]

nice, thank

Probably like Burned food, just that you will taste burnt Oxygen and then loose the sense of taste and feel extreme pain afterwards

Is the MC a human?

???

Calm down, not everyone works at "Shelter"-Like Speeds

Please be careful, and dont worry! we know life its hard, and we cant just get mad, we will never get like it, we'll wait all the time necesary

This is short, but believe me, its good

:v

Yeah, but they mention it some good time, and its weird to see a Horny part and get punched with weirdness

Hehe, thank [x')]

[:l] ?

I mean its pretty much admirable, in my opinion, you should not feel bad about taking your time (I mean, making a VN is hard) and even more with that amount of stuff you made, so I mean that there is not a reason to feel sorry about any time-out, like, you really made a big effort, and that is awesome, sorry if I sounded or were rude, I'm not trying to be it at all.

Like, +70 sprites?! Damn, that is a lot...

[xl]

Maybe that event landed with a rogue AI, then it created machines especcially made to kill with some crazy computer-made stuff, I can imagine the fog being a proyection of machines to mess with your mine, and the machines using some material that causes light that induces PTSD

With that massive amount of stuff is more than justified, if its not on the notes, you should say it

You need to do something especific, check what you have not done

Jusr got an update :v

Just get on the dowload part just above the coments, PC is windows and APK is for android devices, the other two are obvious, good luck and drink water My sir!

Yeah, we need to be patient, he needs support, not stress or haste

Art needs a shiton of time sometimes

He needs time, after all, he is working on it, but he is taking a break

OHHH, HECK YES!!!!!!!

Everything is great, but I can recomend the use of "()" for the thoughts, they get confusing with the dialogues.

That can confuse if you ask me

I think all is great and I love this game, but I think it needs more portrait art, like the MC always have a smug face even in tension/weird moments, that my thoughts about it