Thank you for your constructive feedback. The scope was too big in my head and when o started to write it got a bit out of hand, I was so invested myself in my story. :)
Thank you for taking your time reading this story and for you feedback. :) Yes,indeed. I needed to cutout parts just to fit into word count. It’s imperfect,but with this was an interesting challenge.
Thank you for taking a time to read it and to leave a constructive feedback. :) To be honest,I also don’t know much about the universe and all “ins” and “outs”. And since there was a time limit to write a story ,it’s time to get creative ,right ? :) “bloodhound” is just a name I gave to the antagonists,since bloodhound is a dog breed who were bred and were used to track other game I thought it was fitting to give :)
Biggest challenge for me was to fit the story I wanted to tell in one page :)
As a bonus I uploaded an extended version with more dialog and character development. :)
Thank you for your feedback and positive and kind words I really appreciate. I could continue and expand the story, but because there was a time and word count limit, I ended things there. That's why there's two version. Shorter for contest and extended with additional dialog and background more story background. It's a bonus from me, since I enjoyed writing this particular story. :)
