Thank you for taking a time to read it and to leave a constructive feedback. :) To be honest,I also don’t know much about the universe and all “ins” and “outs”. And since there was a time limit to write a story ,it’s time to get creative ,right ? :) “bloodhound” is just a name I gave to the antagonists,since bloodhound is a dog breed who were bred and were used to track other game I thought it was fitting to give :)
Biggest challenge for me was to fit the story I wanted to tell in one page :)
As a bonus I uploaded an extended version with more dialog and character development. :)