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Good game, simple mechanics, easy to play, follow-able story line.

Glad you liked it. 
Thanks for the feedback on the dialogue. 

I was attempting the reflection in her life...as well as at the end of the story. (clearly could be done better :) )
As for the rushed pace, I think I tried to cram too much plot into a short story...

AND definitely thanks for the feedback, helps me to improve for next time.

Love the Court of Mischief idea. Well done.

Excellent use of "peace" during war.

A lovely read. Thank you.

Haha, love the "One man's failure line..."

Love the cyberpunk feel of the story.

So wait...Did K'Ashiem trap something? Or did something trap K'Ashiem? Other then that, well told and well paced.

I loved the negative aspects tied into the Battle Brothers DNA.

Nepenthe again...YEAH. Loved how you used the lines "glass and lies"

Good writing. I liked the Dejaf double-cross.

Interesting dichotomy of two characters takes on the same topic.

The magic was great.

The beyond Havok was interesting.

Don't be afraid to use names with dialogue, it got a bit confusing with who was talking.